My Pirate Story Excerpt

As I mentioned in my previous post, I had been working on a pirate themed short story a while back but lost interest. In looking for that story I came across something else I apparently wrote but don’t remember writing. Have you ever done that? Have you ever written something, given up on it, and then a few months later read it and say to yourself, “Did I really write that?”

Anyhow, the title of the story was “Robotic Pirates” (I doubt that would’ve been the final title). I post it here, because, well, I don’t know why.

“Just give ’em a shove,” said Davis pointing to the man standing near the edge of the insert ship name here. “Think of your family, man.”

“I ain’t got a family,” replied Johnson. “I’m a pirate.”

“Think of yourself, then.” said Davis. “They’ll have our jobs if we don’t do something.”

“Right,” said Johnson as he took a few tentative steps and then charged at the unsuspecting man.

At the last instant the stranger stepped casually to the side without turning around. Johnson fell with a splash into the shark infested waters below. His motion detecting sensors had functioned properly.

………..

As it turned out, Al Gore was right, not about inventing the Internet, but about Global Warming. The Earth’s temperature rose 4 degrees in sixty years, causing the planet’s face to change significantly. As the ice caps melted, the sea rose forming new bodies of water, opening up new sea routes, ushering in a new era of piracy.

At the same time, the United States economy continued to trend globally, . As competition became more and more fierce, with enormous companies, dividing and conquering each other seemingly daily, corporations turned toward a more historic form of competition: piracy.

As the use of piracy grew, governments looked the other way, too busy to worry about international trade, or too scared to disrupt a strong economy. As the years went by, one thing became all to clear to corporations: you can’t trust pirates.

It was at this time, that the RDU90 project was first developed.

Obviously that’s a first draft and it has some cliche’s. However, I think I could’ve done something with that. Ah well.

8 thoughts on “My Pirate Story Excerpt

  1. when I write something and let it rest for a while – I almost always feel the way you described.
    The basic idea is interesting, why not continue a bit later on, I say?

    Right now, I have this story I named Copper Moon, and I don’t feel like finishing it, either.
    Or, well, I have not entirely given up the idea of finishing it…

  2. That’s a cool start, you could probably turn it into something.

    I have hundreds of aborted stories scattered around my computer. Will I ever use them again? Nope 😛

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